Friday, December 7, 2012

An Excerpt of a Short Story: Working Title: Clock Tower Photograph (A very Rough Draft)


Caroline was the next victim of the picture. When time finally caught up to Jake, reality fell like a hard swung hammer on a thick anvil. There was the rush of sounds—normal sounds, birds chirping, wind rustling the thin leaves of the tall oak in the yard, the distant rumble of a tractor, the kitchen sounds pouring over from inside the house and then the sudden slamming thunderous commotion of the back door.
Caroline had been frozen too.
First Caroline’s jaw stayed shut, like wires had bound it tight together. Then everything came loose. Everything. Her jaw dropped, swung limply, her shoulders slumped, her body bent, and just before she fell to her feet as it looked she would, she sprung. It was an altogether beautifully ugly motion as she pounced on the picture and where Oliver had been before.
There was a sound like the lonely wail of wind on the top of hills during winter. It may not have been a word she said, but Jake always remembered it as one. A long and continuous wailing, “No!”
She snatched up the fallen picture and cradled it as if it were the boy himself. What must have been going through her mind was anyone’s guess, predicting anyone’s reaction to seeing such a completely otherworldly event is next to impossible. She cried long and hard, her whole body shivering with the lonely pain of unacceptance. And yet, she seemed perfectly expecting of the entire event, as if she had been cursed once before to face the loss of some great thing that had meant more than life to her.
Jake made steps toward her then, his acceptance far less than perfect. He was still trying to sort through what he had just saw, one hand reached out for Caroline, his long calloused fingers just barely touching the feather soft frizz of her hair before it happened again.
First the sound, then the colors of the picture swirled and leapt out on her milky white flesh and grabbed her. Jake jerked his hand back, sudden terror seizing him, he was completely within the means to offer help—what help there was for such a situation as this—and yet he knew only crippling fear for himself.
She was tugged at first, like a fish caught on a hook, testing the fisherman. She bobbed and weaved first toward the picture then away. Her head turned toward Jake, and in the sea of her eyes he saw the mirror images of all that came before humanity in that long ago endless night of the starless void that once was, a deep and primeval loneliness. And then she was gone, first in bites as the picture pulled her in, and then grand whole parts of her body vanished into the tiny photograph. The last of her to go was the frizzy tips of her long hair that he had just barely touched mere moments ago.
What had he done to deserve such hell?